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some people say that advetising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things . others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . discuss both the views and give your opinion?

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Some people believe that advertising affects us significantly on what we want to buy. Others,
however
, think that
advertisements
 are so commonly used that we don't pay attention to them anymore. In my opinion,
advertisements
 still play a major role in our decisions, and I will discuss both views in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, the amount of things that we buy from stores has grown significantly in the
last
 decade.
As a result
, nowadays, there has been severe competition between
companies
 to attract customers which is the reason why you can see different kinds of
advertisements
 on billboards or television programmes.
For instance
, whenever a football match is played, you can see all sorts of
advertisements
 coming up, which can disturb the audience resulting them in not paying attention to any
advertisements
.
on the other hand
, many people believe that
advertisements
 are still great at persuading us to buy from a special brand. They think that if
advertisements
 were ineffective,
companies
 wouldn't spend a large proportion of their venue on advertising their products.
For instance
, Nike spends millions of dollars on advertising its shoes in order to stand out from other competitors,which is one of the reasons
its
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 one of the
best selling
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companies
 in the world. In conclusion, I think,
although
 we are bombarded with numerous
advertisements
 on the radio or television,and it seems like we pay no attention to them, they still affect us unconsciously, which might be the reason why
companies
 still believe in them and invest a lot of money in
this
 area.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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