Nowadays, in
this
modern ,era there are many different ways of shopping. Online shopping has been easy to buy
products
but sometimes it has risks for internet shopping.
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both views in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, online shopping is
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largest platform
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buying
products
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many people attached because it provides good quality items and
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discount on
products
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these days there are numerous kinds of
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shopping sites.
such
as Amazon,
and Flipkart there are many famous applications in public for online shopping.
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individuals have insignificant options they do not find
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best choice
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their local shops and malls.online shopping store has many options for the public they can buy easily
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their special events.
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showed 60% of people choose online shopping option Rather than going to shops and malls.
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online shopping provides bad quality
products
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they have no return option
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the item and it completely wastes
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money. Another risk, it delivered an order in two weeks period of time and some it delayed on their item. According to a study, online shopping has limited options and discounts. Individuals like to order inexpensive
products
rather than expensive items.
To conclude, internet shopping is the largest platform for buying
products
and it is easy to purchase items rather than offline
products
. But sometimes it delayed their order and provide a bad quality thing.