online shopping seems to be replacing the traditional method of buying. however some buyers are sceptical to this practice. discuss both benefits and risks associated with online shopping

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both views in upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, online shopping is
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largest platform
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buying
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many people attached because it provides good quality items and
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discount on
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these days there are numerous kinds of
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shopping sites.
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and Flipkart there are many famous applications in public for online shopping.
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individuals have insignificant options they do not find
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best choice
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their local shops and malls.online shopping store has many options for the public they can buy easily
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their special events.
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showed 60% of people choose online shopping option Rather than going to shops and malls.
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online shopping provides bad quality
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they have no return option
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the item and it completely wastes
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money. Another risk, it delivered an order in two weeks period of time and some it delayed on their item. According to a study, online shopping has limited options and discounts. Individuals like to order inexpensive
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rather than expensive items. To conclude, internet shopping is the largest platform for buying
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and it is easy to purchase items rather than offline
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled convenience
  • vast selection
  • digital platforms
  • comparison shopping
  • impulsive buying
  • aggressive marketing tactics
  • risk of fraud
  • counterfeit goods
  • compromised personal data
  • immediate satisfaction
  • physical examination
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