Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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influencers create controversial views. While some proponents agree that famous people have to be paid much, others have a diverse opinion. I am of the belief that if anyone works hard, he or she will be paid more. Both sides will be discussed in the following lines. In the beginning, social media has become a part of every family’s day.

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, it is very important to attract new content creators who can improve

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, In Egypt, President Elsisi

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many conferences for youth and social media stars to help and support them for being

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one of the economic factors which help Egypt to stand up after the

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recission

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. As opposed to

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money

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harmful doings or to create problems, many citizens give

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about

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club, and while he was there, someone from the dancers took

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she published it on the internet.

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famous people have to be helpful and stop using their money

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bad things. In conclusion, after

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both opinions, I am convinced that it is very important to have big salaries which can motivate youth to work harder. Not only do new generations need to be motivated but

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adults need to be more active.