Many young people say that mobile phones are the most important object that they own. Does the popularity of mobile phones among young people have more advantages or disadvantages?

As a result

of

technology

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development, there is

a

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widespread use of mobile

phones

among

people

.

Youngsters

are not excepted in

this

issue and

cell

phones

are considered

as

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the most vital objects

by

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them. Most

people

believe that technological

devices

such

as mobile

phones

have several advantages and these benefits outweigh

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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. The

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necessity

neccessity

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necessity

of these

devices

in learning lessons and doing other activities, as well as using

cell

phones

for communicating with

people

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all over the world will prove

this

issue.

Firstly

,

cell

phones

play a significant role in

youngsters

' lives and help them to improve their knowledge and do their daily activities.

For instance

, individuals can use social media

such

as Youtube to learn their

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language or carry out their university projects based on its information.

In addition

, there are several mobile applications making young

people

motivated and enthusiastic to study and focus on their lessons more. Fortunately, technological

devices

have a great number of positive points discussed

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of them above.

Therefore

, mobile

phones

enable

youngsters

to have

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instant access to a wide variety of websites and applications.

On the other hand

, some

people

are of the belief that mobile

phones

may result in adverse effects

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offsprings

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offspring

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.

For example

, isolation and depression are considered

as

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mental

disease

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appearing because of spending

much

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time in front of

cell

phones

. Undoubtedly, each issue has its own pros and cons and using these

devices

is not an exception. Notably, individuals should try to spend

reasonable

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amount of time

for

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using

cell

phones

to not encounter problems in their lives. To conclude, the popularity of mobile

phones

has

been

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increased among

youngsters

due to

its

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attraction and usefulness. Obviously, these

devices

make our life easier and have numerous benefits

such

as helping

to

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online education. After analysis

on

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this

subject, it is clear that mobile

phones

are the

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indispensable

indispensible

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indispensable

parts

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of our lives,

however

,

youngsters

should try to use them moderately to not face mental problems during their life.