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discuess the different values of the ways which have been used in the Uninted Kingdom during last years.

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The bar graph provided reflects the number of
minutes
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 used by telephone calls in the United Kingdom. It can be noticed that the United Kingdom used three categories: Local-fixed
line
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, National and international-fixed
line
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 and
mobiles
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. Overall, after analyzing that provided chart, it can be observed that citizens have used the local fixed
line
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 the most during these 8
years
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. While the
mobiles
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 have been used less than any other method during these shown
years
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. Regarding the
first
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 4
years
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, there was an increase in all categories but in the local-fixed
line
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 it was a dramatic increase and it scored the highest value in the United Kingdom for 100
minutes
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. Whilst both national and international-fixed
line
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 and
mobiles
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 have slightly increased during these four
years
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. Later on, in the
last
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 four
years
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, the local-fixed
line
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 has fallen down to hit less than 80
minutes
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. While national and international-fixed lines kept gradually increasing,
mobiles
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 have incredibly changed the value from less than 10
minutes
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 by 1999 to around 40
minutes
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 by the end of the 8
years
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.

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