With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

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Contemporary medicine has been showing surprising positive results and hopes for improvements in the nearest future. Thanks to these accomplishments, some believe that communities should take more responsibility in looking after elderly people. I personally believe that a prolonged average life age should not be an issue for human beings to overcome and in
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I will suggest a possible solution to
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with, if we look at to past, since ancient times, mankind was eager to struggle against death and postpone
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natural stage as much as possible.
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tendency saved till hitherto and even we can observe how people trying to find out the secrets of infinity, donate huge amounts of money for investigations, which is from my point of view absurd and breaks some ethical norms of our existence.
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, milestones which we achieved in technology over the
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3 centuries, helped to increase the living standards.
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, the increasing numbers of old people could be considered one of the causes of the earth's overpopulation, especially elderly ones, which is a big mankind concern.
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, the recent practice of Japanese showed us how we can fix
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dilemma. They, as a whole nation, tend to control their birth rate rationally.
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, an average Japanese family have one kid for their whole life.
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, about 20% of adult couples decide not to have a child for their entire marriage ,
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they prefer to adopt children from orphanages which impacts the living standards of the nation positively. Unfortunately, not all communities have the same tendency as present in Japan.
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, another solution was applied by the Chinese government, which is known as a demographic policy. The government obliges its citizens' taxes for each child starting from the
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one. In conclusion, the elaboration of health care and increasing ratio of aged individuals should not be a problem for societies in terms of looking after them. In a world, where inhabitants feel a commitment to their lives and governments to their citizens, humanity can cope with
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