Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A lot of governments claim that financial growth is the

upmost

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principle to achieve , whereas other people feel that many kinds of

progession

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progression

are as important as that on a national level. The purpose of

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essay is to analyse both sides of view and

then

explain why I think that the expansion of

economy

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is not the only primary goal in

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contemporary society. There are merits

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pursuing national development financially. If the average income of individuals is elevated, the level of

consumptions

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will

also

be

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a boost

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to a certain standard. As well as

this

, there will be more taxes for governments to collect and invest in public

infrastructions

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infrastructures

instructions

. To illustrate, the social wellness systems of countries in

Northen

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Northern

Europe

established

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firmly on

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high economic performance and heavy taxes.

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,

greater

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economy usually leads to

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increase

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job opportunities.

However

, there are

also

advantages of investing in other types of developments with

equal

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amount of

efforts

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. If the educational and cultural aspects could

also

be

exmphased

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emphasised

, the social values of achievements could be expanded.

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in turn increases social diversity, leading to a less competitive society.

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Additionally

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Additionally

, more possibilities could

also

be created for those who are relatively humbled. With a much fairer

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educational

educaitonal

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educational

system and broader values of success, a normal person could have more kinds of approaches to improve the social status of their family. These transformations could enforce citizens' trust and

indentification

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identification

with their country. In conclusion, there are merits in both sides of

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arguments

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. On balance,

however

, I believe that the argument of having developments in different social domains rather than solely

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on boosting

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the economy

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economy

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level is a better view.

This

is because social development as a whole can

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truly

truely

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truly

bring diversity and fair opportunities for the general public, leading to stronger bonds between citizens and their belief in governments