It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

There are many different methods of raising

children

all over the world, depending on parents’

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and cultures. But the major argument is about punishing

children

to teach them how to distinguish between right and wrong. most people believe

children

should not be punished, but others think chastening is a good method to help them recognize the true path. Everything

children

do, is a reflection of what their parents did before. So, most

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mistakes

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in their

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because of what they saw. Many psychologists conceive that

instead

of punishing kids, adults should correct their bad habits.

In other words

, when you do something wrong, your

children

record that as a good habit, just because they rely on your

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. Thereby, to avoid

children

’s

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, parents should improve their

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instead

of punishing kids.

In addition

, most of what

children

do is in order to improve their knowledge. They are curious

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and willing to venture into new experiences. They have to feel the heat of boiling water, or they will try to touch it again and again, and even punishment cannot make them stop thinking about what they should avoid.

Therefore

,

instead

of chastening, adults should talk about wrong paths and choices

children

may have, and be patient.

Although

it may put

children

at stake, they have to pass their childhood and adolescence earning new experiences. In conclusion, punishment is not the best way to raise

children

. What kids do is all in order to gain experiences and most of them are impressed by what adults do. Parents and teachers should be patient;

besides

, they should be good models to emulate.