You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently gone to live in a new city. You want to let an English-speaking friend who lives in another country know about it. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Nu Nu, I hope you are doing great! As we haven't gotten in touch recently, I like to let you know that I've recently moved to Kalaw.

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year the weather is too hot in Yangon, and as my parents are too old to take the hot weather so I decided to go to Kalaw so that they can be comfortable living there. And you know what, they love to stay there now despite the fact that they are sometimes missing their home in Yangon.

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, the place where we live is on the mountainside and we have a big garden. It is located near the monastery and weekly wet market too. In the morning, there are many street hawkers who come and sell fresh milk, fresh meat and fresh vegetables. Their homemade breakfast snacks are very delicious too. Not only that you can never forget their local cuisines and delicacies. Since you can have 12-day annual leaves every year, why not you come and see me in Kalaw? I can only say that you can get a lifetime experience and food that you never have before. Please ensure to come and give me a call. Warm wishes, Amy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

203 words

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