In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
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books
instead
of printed books
. Several benefits will be gotten by readers like more economical, and simple. However
, reading e-
books
has some drawbacks like uncomfortable eyesight which will be discussed in upcoming
paragraph.
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benefits
people
who prefer to read e-
books
. Firstly
, in advance of technology many resources for students are available on the internet, a
lot of pupils download many Correct word choice
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books
for their reference. Therefore
, people
can download it for free, even though several e-
books
on a particular website should be paid.
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a student
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students
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books
. Secondly
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tablet
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tablets
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e-
books
everywhere. In addition
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books
.
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problems
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while studying
books
. This
is because people
can not teach e-book
.
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e-books
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prefer to read Fix the agreement mistake
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e-
books
instead
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e-books
also
simple to carry anywhere. However
, this
trend have
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...