Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map
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describes
dscribes
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describes
us
a
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town
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. There are 9 housing neighbourhoods located in
this
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town
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.
In
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addition
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we can see 2 industrial zones on the north-west and south-east sides. The road system seems well-
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developed
. There is one ring road situated in the
town
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centre. And 4 main roads
than
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connect all of the living
neihborhoods
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neighbourhoods
. The only disadvantage is that there
are
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minimum
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of parking places: only 2 are located in the middle square of the
town
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, it is clear that there is a problem with public transportation. We can see only 2 bus
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stopes
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which are located in the central quad of
this
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town
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.
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well
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noticeable
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trend
that
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this
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town
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has a lack of recreational areas. Only 3 of 9
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have their own public areas.
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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