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Some people think that hosting international sports events may be beneficial for a country. Discuss both views.

#people #sports #events #country
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the
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one part of
people
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 it is clear that managing
of
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the
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international
sports
 events may be useful for a
country
. The other side is arguing that there are only disadvantages. But I am, for sure, from the
first
 team!
First
 of all, it is clearly
understandable
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 that our world develops under the trend of globalisation. And
that is
 so important nowadays
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not
leave
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 a public society. And one of the ways to not escape from
the
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international relations is hosting some
of
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sports
 events. It helps a lot to make your
country
more
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 valuable player in the
politics
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 field.
Moreover
, when some
country
 is planning to organise
sports
 event, it is starting the
pcoress
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process
progress
 of
building
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the building
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 of huge and
increadible
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incredible
incredibly
 facilities. Developing infrastructure is a symbol of
Olympics
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 games,
for example
.
Finally
, when the games end, all
that
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sports
centers
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 continue to be used by people of receiving
country
. I think, it is a big advantage for national
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sportsmen
sportsmen's
sportsmens
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sportsmen
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 and even for the common humans.
In addition
, when some famous
sports
 event is taking place in a
country
, it is a great possibility for
a
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cultural exchange. From my point of view, natives should be amazed
with
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 new connections and new experiences of communicating with
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foreigners
foreingers
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foreigners
. To summarise, I guess, I would really like to have
such
experience
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 in my life: being a part of some huge and well-known
sports
 event. It is simple to get, that for some people it can be difficult to understand
the
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other cultures. And because of that, they will be opposite of having big
sports
 events in their
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home country
homecountry
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home country
. But, as I feel, we should be more
openminded
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