Nowadays many people believe that inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

It has been universally accepted that the problem of hunger is escalating
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alarming
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rate.
this
problem is bringing a state of depression
among
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the world. Despite
of
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improvements in agricultural technology still many go hungry
to
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bed. There are
plethora
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of reasons
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the same and its possible solutions can be suggested too which are discussed as follows. In regards to the problem, the main reason which is responsible is
population
blast
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. As per the research published in the "Times Of India" article no 223,
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population
is increasing at
double
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5 years. It is impossible to produce that much
food
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any agricultural advancements.
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of
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the cold or dry storage facility is available in big cities with more cost that local farmers can not afford. So even though if we have
food
but due to lack of storage facility that will go into wastage. In order to solve
this
serious issue , some measures should be taken.
Firstly
,
government
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should impose some laws regarding
population
control
for example
people can have only 1 or 2
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, can take reference to china how they have controlled
population
growth and now they are able to provide proper
food
to their countrymen. Another solution could be
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government
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can provide subsidies to local farmers to open warehouses or cold storage so that
food
can be stored longer.
Additionally
can provide more transportation options so that
food
can reach from one place to another in less time. To Conclude , even though , advancement has been made in agriculture which is doubled or tripled the
food
production but still many children are malnutrioned or remain hungry. In the above ,essay we discussed
few
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solutions .
However
, solving
this
global issue is not easy but with the joint effort of the people and government can mitigate
this
complex issue.
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