Nowadays many people believe that inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?
It has been universally accepted that the problem of hunger is escalating
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the same and its possible solutions can be suggested too which are discussed as follows.
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but due to lack of storage facility that will go into wastage.
In order to solve this
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the government
population
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people can have only 1 or 2 child
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children
population
growth and now they are able to provide proper food
to their countrymen. Another solution could be,
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can provide more transportation options so that food
can reach from one place to another in less time.
To Conclude , even though , advancement has been made in agriculture which is doubled or tripled the food
production but still many children are malnutrioned or remain hungry. In the above ,essay we discussed few
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However
, solving this
global issue is not easy but with the joint effort of the people and government can mitigate this
complex issue.Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on
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