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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 internet can be accessed from anywhere and anyone can post any kind of
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, which could be fake or based on assumptions. I partially agree that
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 published on
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 is fake as it can be verified from
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 paragraph with a suitable conclusion. On the one side, surfing online has been proven to best source of information for numerous factors.
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 and foremost, online media is the fastest way of acquiring
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 or informative data in which people can find a million results for their research work in a fraction of a
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, it does not only make broadcasting easy but it
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 has been proven to be the cheapest source of gaining ample data. To cite an example, various platforms
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 as Youtube, Instagram, and Facebook are extremely popular among youngsters, where they can post their talented work free of cost.
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, they may popular as well as successful in their streams
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 as music, singing, and dancing activities.
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 practice is not to be always blamed for inaccurate data.
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 , Now the
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 is mostly forwarded or reshared due to
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 it is not possible to find out the source of the story
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 its validity cannot be verified , and without
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 it would not be wise to believe what is shared. And nowadays many people have
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 to post or report on their accounts and make them public which could be fake .
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, the
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 about covid -19 vaccine has been made that it will impact
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 reproduction system
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 of
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 hoax,
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 have denied taking the vaccine . In conclusion, it can be said that
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 the internet contains some irrelevant headlines which are untrustworthy, we cannot ignore the speed and availability of genuine content on
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 platform that makes people's research easier and faster. Needless to state that it's the individual's responsibility to find correct results.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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