Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#anyone #post #news #internet #trust #information

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internet can be accessed from anywhere and anyone can post any kind of

news

, which could be fake or based on assumptions. I partially agree that

news

published on

internet

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the internet

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is fake as it can be verified from

another resources

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notion and my opinion will be discussed in

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paragraph with a suitable conclusion. On the one side, surfing online has been proven to best source of information for numerous factors.

First

and foremost, online media is the fastest way of acquiring

news

or informative data in which people can find a million results for their research work in a fraction of a

second

Besides

this

, it does not only make broadcasting easy but it

also

has been proven to be the cheapest source of gaining ample data. To cite an example, various platforms

such

as Youtube, Instagram, and Facebook are extremely popular among youngsters, where they can post their talented work free of cost.

As a result

, they may popular as well as successful in their streams

such

as music, singing, and dancing activities.

Therefore

this

practice is not to be always blamed for inaccurate data.

On the other hand

, Now the

news

is mostly forwarded or reshared due to

this

it is not possible to find out the source of the story

hence

its validity cannot be verified , and without

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it would not be wise to believe what is shared. And nowadays many people have

authorization

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to post or report on their accounts and make them public which could be fake .

for example

, the

news

about covid -19 vaccine has been made that it will impact

female

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reproduction system

as a result

this

hoax,

many

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have denied taking the vaccine . In conclusion, it can be said that

although

the internet contains some irrelevant headlines which are untrustworthy, we cannot ignore the speed and availability of genuine content on

this

platform that makes people's research easier and faster. Needless to state that it's the individual's responsibility to find correct results.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Credibility
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Misinformation
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