Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, a certain section of people contends that it is a misspending by protecting endangered

species

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as tigers, whales and so on. In my ,opinion I opt to differ.

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of foremost, I believe that it is the

responsibility

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of the local authorities that require to protect these

species

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matter of protecting our forests without cutting down the trees for other resources, which leads to polluting the

environment

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, falling off branches on top of the

animals

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, and implement traps to kills these

animals

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in other terms deforestations.

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situation

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continues in the ocean,

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unfortunately

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the authorities build underwater museums to attract tourists, where they spend unnecessarily killing these underwater

species

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. In another situation where oil leakage ships entered the harbour which killed many

animals

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in the ocean,

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however

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the

government

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did not take any

responsibility

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regard.

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, the rationale in

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context is that it is the

responsibility

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of the

government

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to handle these as the public is highly taxed on daily commodities,

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the

government

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should enable ways to protect the

environment

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rather than destroying and

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infrastructure. Sri Lanka is considered a

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-world country, and saving these

species

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will allow us to increase the tourism industry, there are ways where these councils can increase revenue rather than pollute the

environment

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. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned protecting the

environment

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and

animals

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is the duty of the

government

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,

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however

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it is the

responsibility

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of the citizens of the country to raise their voices in

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a situation.