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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #waste #money #species #tiger #whale
Nowadays, a certain section of people contends that it is a misspending by protecting endangered
species
such
 as tigers, whales and so on. In my ,opinion I opt to differ.
First
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 of foremost, I believe that it is the
responsibility
 of the local authorities that require to protect these
species
, evidence in
this
 matter of protecting our forests without cutting down the trees for other resources, which leads to polluting the
environment
, falling off branches on top of the
animals
, and implement traps to kills these
animals
 in other terms deforestations.
This
 situation
also
 continues in the ocean,
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unfortunately
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 the authorities build underwater museums to attract tourists, where they spend unnecessarily killing these underwater
species
. In another situation where oil leakage ships entered the harbour which killed many
animals
 in the ocean,
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however
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 the
government
 did not take any
responsibility
 in
this
 regard.
Secondly
, the rationale in
this
 context is that it is the
responsibility
 of the
government
 to handle these as the public is highly taxed on daily commodities,
therefore
 the
government
 should enable ways to protect the
environment
 rather than destroying and
additionally
 ways to
maintain
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 infrastructure. Sri Lanka is considered a
third
-world country, and saving these
species
 will allow us to increase the tourism industry, there are ways where these councils can increase revenue rather than pollute the
environment
. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned protecting the
environment
 and
animals
 is the duty of the
government
,
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 it is the
responsibility
 of the citizens of the country to raise their voices in
such
 a situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • intrinsic value
  • existential threat
  • ecosystem
  • conservation
  • economic benefits
  • funding allocation
  • competing needs
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