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“Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues.” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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This
 is a question that came in the January 2020 questions paper. But you can prepare for IELTS writing task 2 topics 2021 with answers from
this
 section.
TV
 is
one
 of the powerful sources of including everyone irrespective of their gender and age.
TV
 is
one
such
 invention that has brought colour to the life of
people
 and it has made it possible to sit back on our couch with a cup of coffee and have all the news about every corner of the world. In
such
 a scenario where
TV
 has the most influencing power, I think that along with an emphasis on Entertainment through
TV
 shows, social
issues
 should
also
 be given equal importance, so that
people
 become aware of them. Not only to spread awareness but to let
people
 think about the solution to the problem prevalent in society. There are many
issues
 around us that we don’t know about, So
TV
 is
one
such
 source, through which laymen can understand the importance of social
issues
. And social
issues
 should be in the form of ads but in the form of shows that are without any manipulation. Even in the era of the internet where you get everything in just
one
 click,
TV
 is still prevalent and it is still the source for millions of
people
. So to make the most out of
this
 opportunity, it should be used for social good.
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