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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, everyone has a gadget mostly used to communicate without face meetings. It has simple characteristics
such
 as short or essential. Many
people
 think it was a bad impact on the survival of
grammar
 and spelling. I do not agree with
this
 view because
this
 way is only used for
the
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practical situation. In the reality, the
people
 who implemented instant
communication
 are
also
 aware of the
grammar
 and spelling on formal occasions. Human activities often include a relationship that involves them in making
communication
 by phone or computer. The type is mostly simple and not formal that does not need strict
grammar
 and spelling.
For instance
, they only write OK while agreeing without overthinking the rules of language in writing form. It commonly occurs unawarely to communicate things quickly occasion. In formal matters,
people
 who often do online
communication
is still implemented
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 the
communication
 in accordance with rules i. e in writing letters, proposals or
speechs
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speech
speeches
 in meetings. It requires good
grammar
, so there is no need to worry about the survival of language on the track pattern. Most
people
 know how to place themselves when in
this
 situation. In conclusion,
people
 often choose to use basic
pattern
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 in online
communication
 that sometimes do not
according
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 the rule’s word.
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Although
Altough
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Although
 it was happen, it is not mean they
were not forget
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 it. They are still holding on
the
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grammar
 when doing the formal one in many settings
such
 as office, school, and meetings (both offline and online).
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