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Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. What the causes of it & is it a psetive or negative development?

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Across countries, it
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 been considered that computer
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 becoming popular among younger people.
This
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severals
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 reasons towards
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 happened and why it is not a beneficial enlargement for the greenhorn generations.
first
 and foremost, the unprecedented popularity of online gaming
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world wide
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 can be explained by
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This
 is mainly due to
accessibility
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 of
internet
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 as technological devices
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 adequate space to play outside. Another explanation is that
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 adults are terribly bustling with their own professional lives, owing to
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 their offspring busy they permitted them to play digitally.
As a result
, from a very early stage of their
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life
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 they get
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exposure
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exposed
 to playing colourful
games
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Finally
, all types of virtual
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 apps demonstrate
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 playing
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 image which
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 influenced them to play.
On the other hand
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enormous drawbacks
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. Fastly, computer
games
 significantly affect the mental health of
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young gamers because it
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 time for social interaction with their peers.
Secondly
, if the little champions continuously abuse the internet
games
 they have very minimal time to study
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 a result they gained
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grade
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of
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 their academic life which clearly prohibited them
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accomplishe
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successful
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career
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Lastly
, virtual
games
 make
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adorable
adorables
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adorable
 violence,
for example
,
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 early age children get involved with murder, which is a clear noxious effect of online
gaiming
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gaming
. To sum up, digital
gaiming
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gaming
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undoubtedly
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 a disadvantage blooming of
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modern
moder
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modern
 era, that's why children should be provided more time to play outdoor sports rather than sitting in front of a screen.
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