You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you could start

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student who is looking for a part-time job. I am writing

this

letter to you to apply for an opportunity that you could give me to work at your football

club

. I am studying at the University of ABC and will graduate before July. My program is sports health systems.

This

program can resolve lots of problems that athletes have during matches or daily exercises. I have two years of experience, and I think if I can work in your football

club

, I can help team members refresh themselves and keep their power. I like to play football, and I always watch the matches that your team plays with others. Your

club

is famous and very successful. I heard that the work environment is

also

very nice

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and that all the

club

employees are friendly and helpful.

Therefore

, I wish I could become an employee of your group. As I mentioned I will finish my studies before July so that I can start my job in July. I am looking forward to receiving your response. If you need any information, please connect

with

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me. Thank you so much. Yours sincerely, Kevin

Submitted by kevin. B on Mon Nov 07 2022

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8 paragraphs

196 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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