Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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this

present world,

news

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more and more popular on social media or

newspaper

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in newspaper

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. Some

people

believe that

such

information

are

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not connected to their lives,

therefore

they don’t want spend to much time

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it. It

is disagreed

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disagrees

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that

news

is not essential for our

live

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lives

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. Analysing the importance of

news

from governance, as well as the updating of

weather

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forecast

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will prove

this

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people

could

found

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important information that

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governance

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the governace

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governace

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governance

would like to inform

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them through breaking

news

on current affairs programmes or

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newspaper

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newspapers

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people

want to look for the location that

grant

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for

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them

the

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identity cards, they will have to search for

concerned

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news

or video that Governance published on many social media.

This

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will

wil

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will

support

them

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following

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the right direction and

finish

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their documents. So,

this

makes it clear that

people

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could

cound

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could

not live without

news

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weather

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forecast is one kind of

news

that cannot be

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in our daily routines.

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, if

people

are going to host an event outside, they often update

weather

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condition

conditions

conditon

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conditions

planing

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dates in order to deal with

unexpectable

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weather

could

be happen

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is one of

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necessary

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necessary

step

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preparation

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process to ensure the event would be

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successful

sucessful

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successful

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, it

become

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apprarent

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apparent

that

news

is useful

with

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us. To summarise, there are many

kind

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news

which are

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necessary

neccessary

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necessary

concered

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concerned

to our daily lives.

Thus

, it is clear that the idea that

people

waste time when reading

news

on multimedia cannot be supported. After analysis on

this

subject, it is predicted that

news

are

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more and more booming in

the

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our world and become an

essetial

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essential

part of our lives.

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Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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