Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: ● Thank them for the holiday and the photos. ● Explain why you didn’t write earlier. ● Invite them to come and stay with you.

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Dear Bary, I'm so glad to know that you are planning to spend your summer vacation at a campsite,

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would be amazing for an introvert like you. You are going to have a lot of fun there. I know it's your

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time but think about making so many new friends during the

trip

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. Some of them will definitely continue to be friends with you even after the

trip

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, same as my two friends John and Phil.

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, consider living in tents, it is an amazing experience. Those are nothing like usual houses, it's open and very near to nature.

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, there are a few things I must warn you about before your

trip

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. Since it is summertime, expect insects around so must carry a repellent cream or a spray for your safety.

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tents are a great place to stay, there is a disadvantage as well like one common washroom. Hygiene is really a challenge there but it is still manageable. As I think about it, I feel I could join you for the camping

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. Wouldn't it be great if both of us are together! Let's do

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. Best Regards, Akshat.

akshatdaroraTue Sep 06 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

194 words

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Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: ● Thank them for the holiday and the photos. ● Explain why you didn’t write earlier. ● Invite them to come and stay with you.

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

it is genereally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. discuss both these point and give your opinion.

One major problem faced by large cities is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science at university. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?