Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.

Unfortunately, in modern societies,

violence

is rising and playgrounds bullying seems to be growing too. People’s opinions differ, as to whether parents should teach their siblings not to hit back at bullies or they should teach them to be able to defend themselves. While there are some strong arguments in

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of hitting back, I still believe that

violence

only breeds

further

violence

.

However

, there are some examples when

violence

was stopped

as a result

of victims hitting back or their elder brothers protecting them by threatening or beating up the offender. It shows that in some cases

violence

helps to handle bullying. For the

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have been made and proved that children who grow up in violent families often grow up to be violent themselves.

In addition

, some children may enjoy the power associated with

violence

and develop into bullies. So, it goes without saying that parents should promote anti-violent behaviour.

Furthermore

,

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organization

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should attend schools and speak with

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, explaining the way of handling different problems. Evidencing that schools should have various psychological sessions acting

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of conflicts and showing that all conflicts can be resolved through discussion and compromise rather than force. In my

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will have a great positive impact on growing people and I am absolutely sure that when they are adults they will behave

similarly

and try to avoid

violence

. In conclusion, despite there

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some examples of

violence

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effective weapon against bullies, I strongly believe that teaching non-violent strategies is way more productive in the long term. And I think that governments should introduce inti-violent education , in

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clubs etc, into schools.