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People can know about cultures and life through internet. So there is no need to travel to other countries to know about the culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Citizens have been using the internet to know about other
cultures
, and there is a belief that there is
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necessity to travel abroad to know other
cultures
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completely
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 disagrees with
this
 statement because tourists need to interact with each other to better understand a
culture
 and it is important to avoid that many airline companies fire their employees due to the low demand. There is a special value when
people
 visit a
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foreign
foreing
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foreign
 country than just watching several pictures o line. It
is well know
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 that getting in contact with
people
 or places gave an emotional
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attachment
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attachment
with
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 places. These
pleasants
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 emotions create a concept
about
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 foreign
cultures
 and customs. More importantly, citizens might taste several flavours that a meal might have, so they can have a better
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understanding
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understanding
 of a
culture
.
For instance
, many American
people
 travel to Mexico to enjoy
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mexican
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 cuisine and learn from their
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receipts
recepits
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receipts
 that later on some of them might open a
mexican
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 restaurant in California. Another issue is that some
earlines
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airlines
 companies have lost many customers because some clients decide to know other
cultures
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through
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through
 the internet.
This
 cause
an economical drawbacks
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 because many
business
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have
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 fired their employees due to low demand
on
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 flying. I have no doubt that without
people
traveling
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 abroad, there will be
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 opportunities for many employees to keep their jobs.
Also
, local street vendors have lost their businesses
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because
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because
 there are
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 tourists asking for their services. All
these
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 lead to
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 society's balance.
For instance
, starting
2021
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, in California,
Americna
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American
America
Airline
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 increases their prices due to low demand
on
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 flying and many
people
 lost their jobs.
This
 increment to find more homeless
people
 to live on
streets
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 and
bandalism
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vandalism
 increases as well. To conclude, in order to know other
cultures
, individuals need to visit the place, know their
people
 and taste their cuisine to have a better picture of the
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situation
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situation
. There is
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 complete information through pictures and videos when it comes to
know
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 a
culture
. I believe it is essential that
people
 travel
other
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to other
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 places to know better a
culture
.
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