Responsible tourists could preserve both the local culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism is one of the greatest industries growing in an exponential way. Nowadays, many people prefer to have vacations

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different beautiful places; alone, with a group or with a family.

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, there are some negative effects of

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activity, which include the irresponsible behaviour of a few tourists, which is affecting the local culture and the environment. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement that, it is impossible to be a responsible

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. I think

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way for two reasons, which I will discuss in

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the responsibility for maintaining the local culture and the surrounding is for both, the

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and the local people of that area.

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, if any

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sees the

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very much neat and clean, to some extent he/she will

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try to maintain that standard.

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, if

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sees a

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, where cleanness

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not up to the mark and the local people

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make their

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dirty by putting the garbage or

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waste anywhere they feel convenient for them. we see

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dramatically, tourists

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doing the same thing.

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, the management of that

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plays

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distinguishable role

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maintaining

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maintaining

the beauty

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culture and surroundings. My own personal experience is a compelling example of

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year in my summer holidays I get a chance to visit a renowned city with beautiful locations and landmarks. I see that the city was very much clean, full of boarding indicating to keep the environment clean. at every five minutes of ,walking there was a dustbin and the maximum path was full of green trees and flowering plants.

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follow the rules for maintaining the cleanliness of the area without any problem. In conclusion, I believe that

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being a responsible

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is a possible thing, which depends on the other's factors

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, as mentioned above.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

320 words

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Responsible tourists could preserve both the local culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g.: goods, service, news ). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

It is sometimes said that people who do physically hard jobs should be paid as much as those with higher-level qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.