Responsible tourists could preserve both the local culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism is one of the greatest industries growing in an exponential way. Nowadays, many people prefer to have vacations

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different beautiful places; alone, with a group or with a family.

However

, there are some negative effects of

this

activity, which include the irresponsible behaviour of a few tourists, which is affecting the local culture and the environment. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement that, it is impossible to be a responsible

tourist

. I think

this

way for two reasons, which I will discuss in

this

essay.

Firstly

, to embark with the notion that

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the responsibility for maintaining the local culture and the surrounding is for both, the

tourist

and the local people of that area.

For instance

, if any

tourist

sees the

place

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very much neat and clean, to some extent he/she will

also

try to maintain that standard.

Similarly

, if

tourist

sees a

place

, where cleanness

are

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not up to the mark and the local people

also

make their

place

dirty by putting the garbage or

the

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waste anywhere they feel convenient for them. we see

its

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dramatically, tourists

also

doing the same thing.

Subsequently

, the management of that

place

also

plays

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distinguishable role

for

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maintaining

maintaing

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maintaining

the beauty

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their

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culture and surroundings. My own personal experience is a compelling example of

this

last

year in my summer holidays I get a chance to visit a renowned city with beautiful locations and landmarks. I see that the city was very much clean, full of boarding indicating to keep the environment clean. at every five minutes of ,walking there was a dustbin and the maximum path was full of green trees and flowering plants.

As a result

, I

also

follow the rules for maintaining the cleanliness of the area without any problem. In conclusion, I believe that

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being a responsible

tourist

is a possible thing, which depends on the other's factors

also

, as mentioned above.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Responsible tourists could preserve both the local culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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the rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars