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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

#scientists #tourists #travel #environment #pole #development
With the booming development of technology, it
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 to set foot
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far-flung regions, While I can understand that
this
 development can bring certain merits for human civilization , it is my firm opinion that it is likely to wreak havoc on nature. On the one hand, A school of thought holds that the appearance of human footprints
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remote areas can do
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 for both science and tourism. There are an enormous number of unveiled secrets that can be tremendously beneficial for researchers to conduct their studies.
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 is a high possibility that scientists can accidentally discover ancient ruins or fossils of a mysterious, alien creature in previous civilizations that
people
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 helps them supplement data and clarify the secrets of ancient civilizations
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 potential to serve the future science of human history.
In addition
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 of travel enthusiasts, which renders their options more diverse for holidays with one-of-a-kind experiences
On the other hand
 , I would firmly assert that these positive aspects are overshadowed by the demerits. When
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 easy approach to primitive and thin populated areas, they are inclined to migrate and start their business as the standard of living in
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 is high and difficult to accommodate
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 needs of them.
This
 will create respective response waves that cause
people
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 and lead to the repercussions that
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nature here will suffer irreversible damage
such
 as mass deforestation or industrialization due to poor environmental protection awareness of
people
. In sum , it is my firm conviction that the potential hazardous risks of access to remote environments outweigh the possible upsides for the aforementioned reasons.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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