You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit your country

Sorry, I haven`t written to you for ages. I have been so busy since my final exams are coming up

month. Wish I could cancel my exam and

visit

your country again. I had a lovely time when I was there and I could not thank you enough for showing me all the national parks and beaches in your city. Our

visit

to Karana national park was the tour I enjoyed the most

although

we failed to see lion cubs. It was my

first

time seeing mammals like African elephants, lions, zebras and baboons. Do you remember the time we touched a hyena ? The whole trip was so much fun and I wish I can sneak out of my home and take the

flight to your country again. My exams will be ending in the

third

week of

month and It would be great if you could

visit

Sri Lanka for a vacation. I`m happy to show you all the famous national parks and birding hot spots in Sri Lanka. I know you have got your university holidays until November, so you have no excuses but to

visit

here. It would be great if you can tell me whether it is possible to make it so I can arrange all bookings. Look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Migara

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

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