You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

#hotel #receptionist #manager

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my problem. I would like to talk about my

breakfast

, I used to eat

breakfast

at 9 but I could not eat

breakfast

because you served it very soon. in fact, when I woke up I noticed that time

breakfast

was finished. if possible for you I want to have

breakfast

at 9 o'clock, especially for today. because I am going to work tonight till after midnight and likely I will get up late tomorrow.

in addition

, I should have a regular plan for my

breakfast

otherwise

, I can become too sick and it would be effective on my work. when I was in the previous hotel I have been receiving

breakfast

in my room and I do not have to go to the hotel's restaurant, you can manage

this

issue with

this

solution and I can get my

breakfast

in my room after 9 pm, I am really comforted when I am in your hotel there is just a problem that I wanted to talk about that. I am looking forward to hearing your answer. Yours faithfully. Sajjad

Submitted by mail.100jad on Wed Sep 07 2022

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