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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think it is negative for children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Advertising is one of the major concerns in modern society. Whether it can be designed mainly for kids is a
contraversial
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controversial
 issue. While
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advertisements
advertisments
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advertisements
 can offer students some benefits, my view is that the cons overweight the pros. It is clear that
advertisements
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aimed at children are rather interesting so
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they can easily attract kids’ attention.
This
 means that students may be easily addicted to these commercials and pay less attention to their studies. So, in order to reduce the negative influence
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 kids’
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,
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advertisements
 should not be created for pupils.
Moreover
, since the advertising aimed to inspire the expenditure desire of individuals, it may be harmful to pupils’ mental health.
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,
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cartoon shows always have lots of toy ads which are really attractive and can easily inspire kids’ “taste”. In
this
 case, If their parents refuse to buy the toys, they may feel upset and depressed.
Nevertheless
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those
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those
 who harbour the view that children can receive
advertisements
 believe that it can improve the economic condition of society. There are, of course, some kids
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 ask their parents to purchase the toys
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and
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 may benefit the local
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economic
econic
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economy
 in a limited way. But it may put more financial burdens
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poor families. In conclusion, as far as study, mental health and
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 are concerned, I strongly hold that
advertisements
 can not aim at pupils. Of course, we should not ignore the important role advertising
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 undertaking in some cases.
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