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With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more genetically modifies food. what are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

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Hi everyone! Today, I am very glad to represent
class
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 6A9 to introduce to you
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our
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tray
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. You know, while the
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 Festival originated in China and is celebrated in many Asian countries, the Vietnamese version has its own amazing traditions and legends. Our best-known tale is about a man named Cuội who hung on to a magical banyan tree as it floated up to the moon. We say that if you look closely at the full moon, you can see the shadow of a man sitting under a tree.
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 tale and legend of the shadow of the full moon have boosted the imagination of famous authors in Vietnam. The celebration of the harvest is an important part of the
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 festival, as many Vietnamese live in rural areas and work as farmers.
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 festival marks a delightful occasion when the work is finished and there’s time to spend with loved ones. To celebrate
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, 6A9,
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 made
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 colourful
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tray
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 which contains
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different types of fruits.
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 symbolizes the admiration and gratitude of the Vietnamese to Heaven and Earth. Under the
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 hands of the students of
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 6A9, our
five-fruit
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tray
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 has turned out to be amazing. With the watermelon in the middle
sofisticately
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sophisticatedly
 carved like a flower and sweetly
riped
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 apples under, the
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 of the
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 is so eye-catching. On top of the watermelon are purple grapes and on the sides are
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papaya like two guards protecting the charming watermelon queen. A normal pomelo under the
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 hands of the students of
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 6A9 has turned out to be a cute and fluffy puppy. Grape hedgehogs,
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 rabbits
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also
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 created.
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, I hope that the
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 of
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 6A9 will contribute a part to the
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 festival of Nguyen Trai secondary school and make it more vibrant,
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colorful
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and
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, I wish everyone a wonderful and happy
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 festival. Thank you for listening.
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