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Hi everyone! Today, I am very glad to represent
class
6A9 to introduce to you
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our
five-fruit
tray
. You know, while the
Mid-autumn
Festival originated in China and is celebrated in many Asian countries, the Vietnamese version has its own amazing traditions and legends. Our best-known tale is about a man named Cuội who hung on to a magical banyan tree as it floated up to the moon. We say that if you look closely at the full moon, you can see the shadow of a man sitting under a tree.
This
tale and legend of the shadow of the full moon have boosted the imagination of famous authors in Vietnam. The celebration of the harvest is an important part of the
Mid-autumn
festival, as many Vietnamese live in rural areas and work as farmers.
Mid-autumn
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festival marks a delightful occasion when the work is finished and there’s time to spend with loved ones. To celebrate
this
delightful occasion, our
class
, 6A9,
have
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made
this
colourful
five-fruit
tray
which contains
of
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different types of fruits.
This
symbolizes the admiration and gratitude of the Vietnamese to Heaven and Earth. Under the
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hands of the students of
class
6A9, our
five-fruit
tray
has turned out to be amazing. With the watermelon in the middle
sofisticately
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sophisticatedly
carved like a flower and sweetly
riped
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apples under, the
center
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of the
tray
is so eye-catching. On top of the watermelon are purple grapes and on the sides are
to
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papaya like two guards protecting the charming watermelon queen. A normal pomelo under the
skillful
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hands of the students of
class
6A9 has turned out to be a cute and fluffy puppy. Grape hedgehogs,
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rabbits
was
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also
created.
Finally
, I hope that the
five-fruit
tray
of
class
6A9 will contribute a part to the
Mid-autumn
festival of Nguyen Trai secondary school and make it more vibrant,
more
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colorful
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and
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lastly
, I wish everyone a wonderful and happy
Mid-autumn
festival. Thank you for listening.
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