In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People
will not buy printed newspapers or
books
in the future because they will be able online reading without paying. I do not agree
that is
more comfortable to read and easy to mark on
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paper
and some online media
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paid for a complete version.
First
of all, reading on printed
paper
makes readers feel comfortable and
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able to spend a long time reading. While
people
read on the special kind of
paper
like eye care
paper
that is
made to preserve the eye energy used, they will feel comfortable and easy to mark on the
paper
for highlight.
In addition
, the attractive print
books
in colour and good arrangement in a pattern can make the readers spend the money to collect them.
In addition
, online media can save money from purchasing printed
books
,
however
some resources online
books
have to pay to get the complete version or total content.
For example
, referencing the academic
paper
which has to subscribe
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publisher to get the total details of the literature papers selected for reference and the smart
paper
maybe not
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online public. To sum up, I do not agree that
people
will read everything online without paying and can make them will not purchase
the
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printed media. The interesting printed
books
are more attractive and reading from eye care
paper
can make
people
more comfortable for a long period of reading while some resources of online
books
are not free to reach the complete details.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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