Write a letter to a cinema manager you have previously been to regarding a problem you had. In your letter mention - Which the movie was and when you saw it - What the problem was - What the manager should do to rectify the problem No more less than 150 words

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express dissatisfaction with the film I watched yesterday in your cinema theatre.

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night, I visited the cinema complex to watch with my wife and children ,

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named "Tarzan". After a few minutes ,start we realize that

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is in Tamil .We checked your online application, and we asked again at the ticket booth in order to double-confirm that the language is Hindi. .

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, the hall was messy and unclean. There was popcorn scattered all over the seats from the previous batch who watched the

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. In fact, I was furious about the situation because we didn't understand any words and were forced to read them from the subtitles. Another reason that made our night worst was the supervisor who refused to change the

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ignoring

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huge mistake.

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, I demand a complete refund for all the tickets and beverages paid for on

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day. Thank you for your consideration and Looking for positive feedback from you. Yours sincerely Pooja

Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on Wed Sep 07 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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