In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?
More
people
will go on Use synonyms
holiday
to their Use synonyms
country
of origin in the future and will not travel abroad on Use synonyms
holiday
. I completely disagree with Use synonyms
this
statement because the Linking Words
experience
of a new culture and more Use synonyms
people
will become richer.
The main reason why I do not think that more Use synonyms
people
will go to their own Use synonyms
country
on Use synonyms
holiday
in the future is that they want to Use synonyms
experience
different cultures. Use synonyms
This
is to say that it is interesting to see how other Linking Words
people
live, dress, eat and worship. Use synonyms
People
can not gain Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
experience
in their own Use synonyms
country
, and, Use synonyms
therefore
, many Linking Words
people
will seek discoveries by travelling to a different Use synonyms
country
. Use synonyms
For example
, a survey which was done by the ministry of foreign affairs in Japan shows that the reason why most of the international visitors who came to Japan Linking Words
this
year wanted to Linking Words
experience
the culture of the Use synonyms
country
.
The Use synonyms
second
reason why I disagree more Linking Words
people
will choose to go on Use synonyms
holiday
to their own Use synonyms
country
is that Use synonyms
people
are getting richer. Use synonyms
This
is because a large number of Linking Words
people
are joining Use synonyms
to
the middle class in developing nations. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, many Linking Words
people
from India and China are expected to increase their income in the coming years.
In conclusion, I believe that more Use synonyms
people
will go on Use synonyms
holiday
abroad because they will Use synonyms
experience
a new culture and many Use synonyms
people
will become richer.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite