In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?
More
people
will go on holiday
to their country
of origin in the future and will not travel abroad on holiday
. I completely disagree with this
statement because the experience
of a new culture and more people
will become richer.
The main reason why I do not think that more people
will go to their own country
on holiday
in the future is that they want to experience
different cultures. This
is to say that it is interesting to see how other people
live, dress, eat and worship. People
can not gain such
experience
in their own country
, and, therefore
, many people
will seek discoveries by travelling to a different country
. For example
, a survey which was done by the ministry of foreign affairs in Japan shows that the reason why most of the international visitors who came to Japan this
year wanted to experience
the culture of the country
.
The second
reason why I disagree more people
will choose to go on holiday
to their own country
is that people
are getting richer. This
is because a large number of people
are joining to
the middle class in developing nations. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, many people
from India and China are expected to increase their income in the coming years.
In conclusion, I believe that more people
will go on holiday
abroad because they will experience
a new culture and many people
will become richer.Submitted by abdelhalimaboismail on
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