Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter apologise for not meeting him/her  explain why you did not contact him/her earlier  suggest a time and place to meet in the future

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Dear Sam, Hope

this

letter of mine finds you in good health and in high spirits. I am sorry that I could not meet you in Delhi as the business meeting went too long and later I was stuck in the traffic.

Moreover

, my phone's battery

also

went off and I did not remember your new phone number. Even though when I got free from my meeting I tried to call you multiple times but your phone was unreachable. Later, I got busy with packing and collecting things for my home and I had to leave to catch my train before the rush hours. I am again very sorry and I will make up for

this

mistake. There will be another get-together by my company in the

month and I will be reaching Delhi 2 days before.

This

time I will organise a movie dinner night at our favourite place for compensation. Hope to see you soon. Your friend, Taran

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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