A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your city and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear John, I am glad to hear that you are coming to Goa for

two-week

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a two-week

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holiday. I am very excited to meet you. I would feel happy if you stay at my place. We have so many rooms in

house

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the house

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so you will have

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apply

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complete privacy

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But if you want to stay in

hotel

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a hotel

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, that would not be a problem as there are

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three

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very nice hotels in our area where I can book for you. You must visit the local museum and

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the sea beach. The foods near the beach cafeteria are excellent. You can book for fire camping and mountain hiking

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would be a great experience for you. I would

also

recommend you to try to

local

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library that has a good collection of books. As a book

lover

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I am sure you will love

this

place. About

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the weather

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, it is moderate in my town, so please do bring jeans, shorts and t-shirts mostly. It might rain sometimes and you should bring your raincoat and umbrella as well. I am very excited to meet you at

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. Regards, Mary

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6 paragraphs

185 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your city and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Some people think that the universities must only accept student with high mark, while others believe that universities must accept students of all ages regardless of their previous grades. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extend do you agree or disgree?

Some people say that environmental pollution because of country development cannot be avoided.

Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.