The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The two charts compare four different retail sectors namely, electronics and applications, food and drinks, home furnishings, and video games in Canada in terms of the rate of their internet
sales
in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, the percentage of online sales
for each of the four various changed outstandingly from 2005 to 2010. The figures for food, drinks and computer games declined moderately, whereas
those for the other two sections dropped.
The online sales
for the proportion of video games were 23%, which was approximately higher 5
% in 2005. Change preposition
than 5
Similarly
, a notable change was witnessed in food and beverage increased by 10% and making it the retail sector with the biggest overall
rate of
the online market.
Change preposition
in
In contrast
, the sharpest fall was in the home furnishings retail sectors, while
this
figure was 25% of these sector’s
retail online Fix the agreement mistake
sectors’
sales
in 2005, it fell to merely 15% in 2010. Electronics and applications accounted for the majority of online sales
were 35% and then
dropped to 30% by 2010.Submitted by ngocanhpham18ulis on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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