Nowadays people are not fit and active as before. These will have negative effect in the future health. What are the reasons and solutions to this issue?
In recent
days
, the health
of people
is not the
same as in the old Add a missing verb
been the
days
.This
will have a bad impact in
our future Change preposition
on
health
years to come. This
essay will elaborate and why this
is so,and give solutions and support with examples to
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of
this
issue.
Many individuals do not take their health
as a priority. The kind of food people
choose to consume goes a long way to affect their health
. We are what we consume and so if we do not eat right, it will affect our health
.For instance
,most people
because of the nature of their work
and busy schedule,tend to eat junk food. They close late from work
or rush from home to work
thereby skipping either breakfast or getting home late from work
just to prepare or buy fast food which are
high in cholesterol and highly spices. Change the verb form
is
Such
foods are known to be a cause of most heart
diseases such
as hypertension and stroke.This
issue can be solved by adequately Correct your spelling
planning
planing
to Correct your spelling
planning
inculprit
into our diet healthy meals which can boost our immunity and energize our system.
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in culprit
culprit
Additionally
, many youth
of today do not like to Change to a plural noun
youths
exercise
. Exercising is a way to increase circulation throughout our body.When we exercise
, it improve
our brain function, Change the verb form
improves
makes
us smart and alert for the Correct word choice
and makes
days
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day's
days'
work
. When we eat and we do not exercise
, our body store
most Change the verb form
stores
as
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of
bad
fat or cholesterol.Correct article usage
the bad
For example
, atherosclerosis is a fat deposit on the lumen of the veins which impedes the flow of blood to the heart
. It slows down the heart
and ultimately results into
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in
heart
failure.Such
health
risk
could be avoided by Fix the agreement mistake
risks
inculpreting
adequate Correct your spelling
inculpating
exercises
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exercise
to
our healthy regimen
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into
Lastly
, alcohol
consumption is one reason why people
our health
will be affected in the future. These days
clubs and pubs have become a booming business and so after a hard day's work
, colleague and friends meet to have a drink up to talk and releases stress. For instance
, people
resort to occasional drinking whereby parties are being organized and mostly alcohol
is served. Alcohol
is known to cause injury to the kidneys when it's highly and habitualy
consumed. Correct your spelling
habitually
habitual
Therefore
is dangerous to our health
. Correct your spelling
The
They
youth must desist from Correct your spelling
The
alcohol
consumption.
In summary, individuals must eat healthy, exercise
and limit alcohol
consumption.Submitted by sarfo.asiedu1 on
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