Nowadays people are not fit and active as before. These will have negative effect in the future health. What are the reasons and solutions to this issue?
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of Use synonyms
people
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the
same as in the old Add a missing verb
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days
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This
will have a bad impact Linking Words
in
our future Change preposition
on
health
years to come. Use synonyms
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essay will elaborate and why Linking Words
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to
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of
this
issue.
Many individuals do not take their Linking Words
health
as a priority. The kind of food Use synonyms
people
choose to consume goes a long way to affect their Use synonyms
health
. We are what we consume and so if we do not eat right, it will affect our Use synonyms
health
.Use synonyms
For instance
,most Linking Words
people
because of the nature of their Use synonyms
work
and busy schedule,tend to eat junk food. They close late from Use synonyms
work
or rush from home to Use synonyms
work
thereby skipping either breakfast or getting home late from Use synonyms
work
just to prepare or buy fast food which Use synonyms
are
high in cholesterol and highly spices. Change the verb form
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Such
foods are known to be a cause of most Linking Words
heart
diseases Use synonyms
such
as hypertension and stroke.Linking Words
This
issue can be solved by adequately Linking Words
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planning
planing
to Correct your spelling
planning
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into our diet healthy meals which can boost our immunity and energize our system.
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Additionally
, many Linking Words
youth
of today do not like to Change to a plural noun
youths
exercise
. Exercising is a way to increase circulation throughout our body.When we Use synonyms
exercise
, it Use synonyms
improve
our brain function, Change the verb form
improves
makes
us smart and alert for the Correct word choice
and makes
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days
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day's
days'
work
. When we eat and we do not Use synonyms
exercise
, our body Use synonyms
store
most Change the verb form
stores
as
Change preposition
of
bad
fat or cholesterol.Correct article usage
the bad
For example
, atherosclerosis is a fat deposit on the lumen of the veins which impedes the flow of blood to the Linking Words
heart
. It slows down the Use synonyms
heart
and ultimately results Use synonyms
into
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in
heart
failure.Use synonyms
Such
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health
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risk
could be avoided by Fix the agreement mistake
risks
inculpreting
adequate Correct your spelling
inculpating
exercises
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exercise
to
our healthy regimen
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into
Lastly
, Linking Words
alcohol
consumption is one reason why Use synonyms
people
our Use synonyms
health
will be affected in the future. These Use synonyms
days
clubs and pubs have become a booming business and so after a hard day's Use synonyms
work
, colleague and friends meet to have a drink up to talk and releases stress. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
people
resort to occasional drinking whereby parties are being organized and mostly Use synonyms
alcohol
is served. Use synonyms
Alcohol
is known to cause injury to the kidneys when it's highly and Use synonyms
habitualy
consumed. Correct your spelling
habitually
habitual
Therefore
is dangerous to our Linking Words
health
. Use synonyms
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The
They
youth must desist from Correct your spelling
The
alcohol
consumption.
In summary, individuals must eat healthy, Use synonyms
exercise
and limit Use synonyms
alcohol
consumption.Use synonyms
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