Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Many

subjects

should be learned in both primary and secondary schools, starting from science, ethics, social knowledge, history,

art

, and

music

. The first four

subjects

are usually the main focus in primary school.

Thus

, students are expected to have more additional courses to learn about

art

and

music

outside schools. It is great for pupils to get

experiences

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experience

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in

such

subjects

, but I cannot agree if

art

and

music

become an obligation for them to fulfil in order to be graduated.

This

essay will explain some considerations to elaborate on the reasons for my argument.

Firstly

,

art

and science are specific skills which are not owned by every single person. They could be learned by anyone for nice to know only, not to be an expert. It could be very stressful for people who do not have talents in those areas to be obliged to study and create things related to them. Talents can be different from one person to another so it is not good to push people to study things they are not into them.

Secondly

, the future is not only about

art

and

music

. There are still a lot of areas that could be explored to be excellent ones,

for example

, science, history, artificial intelligence, and information technology.

Besides

giving practical implementation in daily life, those

subjects

are quite interesting things to know

due to

the development of modern life nowadays. They

also

benefit people for earnings because many recent jobs

related

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are related

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to them. In conclusion, I

endorse

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encourage

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students to study and understand many

subjects

in order to enrich their knowledge, but I could not agree if

art

and

music

must be learned as an obligation in school.