Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to become successful career. While others believe that it is better to get a job staight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Charge
Nurse
District
Nurse
Service Grenville Community Health Care 88 Hightown Road Grenville 08 September 2022 Re:
Ms
Margaret Helen
Martin
, DOB: 25 July 1935 Dear
Nurse
, I would like to introduce
Ms
Margaret Helen
Martin
, who was admitted in our cardiac unit
due to
coronary artery disease. She is set to be discharged tomorrow, and she will need regular monitoring and home visits.
Ms
Martin
has been diagnosed with coelic disease, coronary artery disease, hypertension and hypercholesterolemia. She was prescribed with the following medications: aspirin, clopidogrel, Betaloc, Tritace and atorvastatin. She is
also
overweight with BMI of 29.5. She has been living with sedentary lifestyle. She usually ordered groceries over phone and frozen meals for weekends. She has meal delivery every monday-friday for her lunch and dinner. It would be greatly appreciated if you can visit Mr
Martin
on her home; to monitor her compliance to post-operative medications, to ensure her adherence to dietary regime and daily light excercise rehabilitation.
In addition
, kindly monitor her post-operation site for any bruises or infection. Aside from there,
due to
Ms
.
Martin
has possibility of self-isolation
due to
afraid contact to her family. It would be appreciated if you can include her to social activities. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully,
Nurse
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • specialized knowledge
  • professional fields
  • networking opportunities
  • career path
  • practical experience
  • financial pressures
  • economic independence
  • early work experience
  • apprenticeships
  • vocational training
  • hands-on skills
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