Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What are the reasons for this and how can the problem be tackled?

The health system has had a far-reaching effect on our health,

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prosperous

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countries still facing health issues.

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is a consequence of a couple of reasons that have not been resolved yet. In

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I will outline them and how they might be addressed. Technological

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have been not only in healthcare

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but

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food and utility domains. When it

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a matter of nutrition, it is not a secret, that a vast majority of products have plenty of sugar as well as fat which our

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not

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able to process efficiently. Another major factor,

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private cars

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pollute

polute

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pollute

the atmosphere.

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carbon footprint and our way of living have had changed to

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a sedentary lifestyle. With

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in mind, many people struggle

from

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such

diseases as obesity or chronicle asthma. Solutions for

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puzzles

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is

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pretty obvious.

Recal

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tesis of one wise person "we are what we eat", all individuals must eliminate junk food and take care

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composition

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of products they are consuming. It must

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low chemical elements and be organic.

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that, doing more physical

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exercises

exercise

excersises

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like running or even simply jogging will boost

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immunity

immediately.

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, local authorities can help reduce carbon footprint by investing

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convenient public

transports

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, particularly dedicated lines for buses. In conclusion, none of

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modern medical devices would help if people do not track their diet and have enough physical stress.

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to that, the more public transports are attractive, the more people will jump from their private cars to avoid a traffic

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jam

.

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, the atmosphere would not be under the pressure.