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Many people now live in societies where consumer goods have become cheap. Do advantages outweigh disadvanatges?

#people #societies #consumer #goods #disadvanatges
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In
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 modern era ,it is very easy to get retail
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 at lower rates.
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 can help
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 with a lot of merits than demerits.
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 essay will discuss all reasons why advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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 with,escalating production of
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 like foods,clothes and essential commodities had decreased the marketing value of these
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.
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,every
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 could improve and change their lifestyle. Especially,
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 who are indigent could get rid of poverty.To illustrate, back in the years the mortality rate was high in India due to a lack of enough grains.
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,
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 situation has changed a lot after the government provided an effective consideration on consumer
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.
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, the number of crimes,especially robbery has been reduced effectively through smooth access to essential
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.
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, the availability of these
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 may exhort a negative trend of use and throw, on
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 like clothes and gadgets.
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 can impact the sustainability of the environment by creating pollution. To illustrate, in India most food
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 are packed in plastic covers,
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 of recycling , many
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 would burn them.Eventually,
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 could create air pollution. Whereas, proper awareness of the recycling process of these
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 can effectively dwindle
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 issue. To conclude, even though there are minor challenges while providing
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 ,accurate measurements make the availability of cheap
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 favourable for
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.
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,I believe that these advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Word Count

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mass production
  • globalization
  • consumer goods
  • quality of life
  • overconsumption
  • environmental degradation
  • local economies
  • unethical labor practices
  • throwaway culture
  • materialistic values
  • economic growth
  • national security
  • economic autonomy
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