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Some parent believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both sides.

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Some parents think that
mathematics
 at school is unnecessary and should not be taught others parents thinks that it should remain a basic subject whether it is not useful in future.Overview I will go with the people who think it should be taught
To begin
 , those who think it's an unnecessary subject are wrong because
mathematics
 is used for calculation in many things like calculation in making a home, in the modern world technology is getting to peak time by time with calculation technology it shows you how to make homes it is using in angles in making homes other than that it uses to make a slope.
Furthermore
,it uses in every past pact of
life
.
On The Other hand
 not teaching
mathematics
 to children will cause a hard time for them in future.Because without
mathematics
 they don'
t
 know how to add, subtract, multiple, or divide.With ,that they don'
t
 know how to count something.In every part of ,
life
mathematics
 plays an important role
for example
 if you are going to shop to purchase
eggs
 what will you say to the shopkeeper about how many
eggs
 he gives you you have to tell him that you need 2,4,5,8,10
eggs
then
 he will give you rather than that he can'
t
 give you
eggs
 because you don'
t
 tell him the number of
eggs
. To conclude my essay I must say that there should continue teaching
mathematics
 to children rather than not teaching them because
mathematics
 is something you must teach by your teachers.As I have already said that
mathematics
 plays important role in
life
 without
mathematics
 you will miss important things in
life
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