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Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people.

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 of
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people
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people
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consider tabloids as the most crucial source of
news
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both views and will
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online
news
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conventional
newspaper
 reading as they are less convenient and not easily
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available
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available
 all the
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 . increment in the modern technology
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 around the
people
 , they
preffer
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prefer
 online
news
 because it is easily
availbe
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available
 on their devices rather than
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spending
spreading
time
 on reading the entire
newspaper
.
moreover
 these days the tabloids focus on political
news
 , either criticising or supporting parties , they are devoid of variety rather than
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 on real major issues. the
newspaper
 availability depends on days
for instance
 on national days,
newspaper
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newspapers
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 are not accessible.
newspaper
 publishing is
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also
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 various editing so we
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 get the real facts and some sources .
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people
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 rely on the opinions of editors .
people
 are shifting to digital platforms as
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 not only
provide
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 the real facts and
news
 but
also
 provide the
news
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different
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different
 forms , it could be in the form of videos or written matter . they are available all the
time
 despite what day it is . it
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 to any
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. in conclusion
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digital
platform
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platforms
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 providing
news
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benefits
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benefits
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people
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it
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 as the best source for
news
 .
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