In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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mankind.

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, these days in many societies people are concerned about proper

transport

system because basic human needs are dependent on it. As

such

, most people are of the view that financial investment for constructing railways

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essential. Other think it is beneficial

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the reconstruction of

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transport

system. In

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I personally agree with the

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one.

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,using

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as

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best transportation brings many benefits and disadvantages too. Mainly, it

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time and money when

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constructing new

railways

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lines. Not only that but

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the

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also

need proper

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technological support. Whereas, it reduced road traffic and

also

environmental pollution.

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,

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huge

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amount of passengers and goods at the same time.

In addition

, it is economically beneficial, once finished the construction of railways it is not

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spend

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money again and again.

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, repairing

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rare and easy to maintain.

Secondly

, some people think it is essential that

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of

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transport

system.

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is because there are many benefits regarding

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it.

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as, the service can be provided

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and quickly to the large amount of population who lives every

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and corner of the urban area or rural area.

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many old

transportation

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can repair

within

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low

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cost and

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period of time.

Therefore

, money can use for another development project. In conclusion,

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railway line

give

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some opportunities for a part of the society. Whereas public

transport

provided their service to

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all the citizens.

Therefore

government should try to find solutions with providing better service by using low cost. It is better to improve existing

transport

.