In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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system because basic human needs are dependent on it. As such
, most people are of the view that financial investment for constructing railways are
essential. Other think it is beneficial Correct subject-verb agreement
is
with
the reconstruction of Change preposition
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existing
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the existing
an existing
transport
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I personally agree with the Add a comma
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later
one.
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latter
Firstly
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the train
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best transportation brings many benefits and disadvantages too. Mainly, it Change the article
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waste
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wastes
the
constructing new Correct article usage
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railways
lines. Not only that but Change the noun form
railway
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they
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they
also
need proper advance
technological support. Whereas, it reduced road traffic and Replace the word
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also
environmental pollution. Moreover
, transport
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transports
huge
amount of passengers and goods at the same time. Correct article usage
a huge
In addition
, it is economically beneficial, once finished the construction of railways it is not necessary
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money again and again. Add the particle
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Secondly
, some people think it is essential that reconstruction
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reconstruct
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the public
a public
transport
system. This
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apply
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as, the service can be provided easy
and quickly to the large amount of population who lives every Replace the word
easily
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and corner of the urban area or rural area. Correct your spelling
nook
Besides
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apply
transportation
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transportations
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at
low
cost and Add an article
a low
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Therefore
, money can use for another development project.
In conclusion, new
railway line Correct article usage
the new
give
some opportunities for a part of the society. Whereas public Change the verb form
gives
transport
provided their service to the
all the citizens. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
government should try to find solutions with providing better service by using low cost. It is better to improve existing transport
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