2 You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

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Dear Perry, Hello, How are you? Doing well, I am sure. Well, I just got my BA and now I am aiming for Post-Graduation in Mass Communication

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, Australia in your town. I am glad to be with you; you are my best friend forever and guide me positively in life. I have heard good reviews about

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institution. They are supposed to be really good at placement. That’s very important to me. You must know a lot about

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college

. I did really

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have your honest opinion of the

college

. You know I have been attracted to journalism since I was a kid. Being a reporter

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the eyes and ears of the reader is my dream job. I think I will earn well and get a chance to make a name for myself. I need your little

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. In case, if

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get admission

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, where should I stay? Maybe the

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has dorms or

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may be

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I will need to take a room. If I have to find a room, I need your help to find a place. I don’t mind sharing but the place should be airy and clean and, of course, within walking distance of the

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room. I am

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. I look forward to hearing from you. Regards, Meena

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1Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

229 words

6.50

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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