A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your city and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear John, I am glad to hear that you are coming to Goa for a two-week holiday. I am very excited to meet you. I would feel happy if you stay at my place. We have so many rooms in the house so you will have

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complete privacy. But if you want to stay in the hotel, that would not be a problem as there are two or three very nice hotels in our area where I can book for you. You must visit the local museum and

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the sea beach. The foods near the beach cafeteria are excellent. You can book for fire camping and mountain hiking

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would be a great experience for you. I would

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recommend you to try to

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library that has a good collection of books. As a book lover, I am sure you will love

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place. About

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, it is moderate in my town, so please do bring jeans, shorts and t-shirts mostly. It might rain sometimes and you should bring your raincoat and umbrella as well. I am very excited to meet you at

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. Regards, Marry

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