You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter: • Explain what will be happening • Offer your apologies in advance • Invite him to join the celebration

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Dear Mr John, I am your

-door

neighbor

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Perry and writing to inform you that I have recently graduated from

the

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Cambridge University. To celebrate

this

special event, I and my family have invited a few guests to a house

party

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Sunday evening. The

party

will begin at 7 PM. I have made

arrangement

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for 50 people including my friends, relatives and

neighbourers

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neighbours

. We have decided to have an outdoor

party

, mainly a barbecue and a music gal. My friends would be cheering up and have loud conversations during the

party

and I am afraid the music might disrupt your sleep. Please accept my sincere apology in advance for the commotion

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the

party

and the gathering. I hope you would be kind enough to endure

this

disturbance considering how special

this

event is for me. I

also

want to you be a part of my celebration with your family as

this

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part of my life. Please accept my invitation and enjoy

party

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the party

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with us. Hope you will definitely come to

party

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and give me your best wishes for

future

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. Yours sincerely, Perry

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant milestone
personal achievement
celebration
attendees
venue
advance apologies
inconvenience
noise level
parking arrangements
warm invitation
festivities
get to know
minimize disruption
considerate parking
neighborhood harmony

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