You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter: • Explain what will be happening • Offer your apologies in advance • Invite him to join the celebration

Dear Mr John, I am your
next
-door
neighbor
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Perry and writing to inform you that I have recently graduated from
the
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Cambridge University. To celebrate
this
special event, I and my family have invited a few guests to a house
party
on
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next
Sunday evening. The
party
will begin at 7 PM. I have made
arrangement
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for 50 people including my friends, relatives and
neighbourers
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neighbours
. We have decided to have an outdoor
party
, mainly a barbecue and a music gal. My friends would be cheering up and have loud conversations during the
party
and I am afraid the music might disrupt your sleep. Please accept my sincere apology in advance for the commotion
from
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the
party
and the gathering. I hope you would be kind enough to endure
this
disturbance considering how special
this
event is for me. I
also
want to you be a part of my celebration with your family as
this
is
important
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part of my life. Please accept my invitation and enjoy
party
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with us. Hope you will definitely come to
party
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and give me your best wishes for
future
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. Yours sincerely, Perry
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