You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your immediate manager. In your letter: • Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you • Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company • Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs

Dear
Mr.
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John, I am writing
this
letter to provide you
information
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with information
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regarding
invitation
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the invitation
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received to attend the networking conference at Hybrid Company on
24th
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the 24th
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of July. As
,
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this
conference is important for me because I will learn new skills which assists in my specialization. I have received the invitation as I got
award
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of
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best performance in networking
last
year from our company.
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,
this
seminar will enhance my knowledge which will be useful at
office
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.
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, it would
also
aid
company
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by providing the lecture to my team members and other employees who
is
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interested in
this
topic. I have to take leave for three days. It is in Sydney,
distance
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is 6 hours from my place. I request
,
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if you can give me off with pay and if possible you can take care of my travelling expenses according to the policy of
organization
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. I look forward to hearing from you and expect paid leave and travelling
cost
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. Yours Sincerely, Perry
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