You have been assigned to give a networking presentation with your colleague from a different office, who you met last year. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter: • Inform your colleague that you will be working together • Provide your initial ideas on the networking presentation • Ask for a time to meet and practice the presentation

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Dear

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Johnson, I am writing

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letter regarding the networking presentation assigned to us. I want to remind you, I met you

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year seminar "Artificial Intelligence" organized by the company. I feel

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to work with you on

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topic as you have

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expertise in

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field.

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, I have decided

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ideas for

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topic.

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of all, we need to gather all the vital information regarding our task. Apart from it, we should keep ourselves vacant for one hour after

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office time as we need to

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a lot to give our best. In the end, we will distribute the topics according to our convenience, which will reduce the burden on a particular

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shoulder. Please suggest me timings, so that we can cope

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with the activities assigned to us. I would be free on weekend

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we can

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during weekdays but I will be available only on alternative days starting from Monday. If possible let's tomorrow for

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discussions. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Perry

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

180 words

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