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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

#countries #children #work #people #responsibility
Nowadays, in many
countries
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children
 use their leisure in paid
work
. Some people are not approving
this
,
on the other
hand
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 some consider it
as
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a valuable thing. In my point of
view
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 it is a marvellous
experience
 for
children
. I think it will be a great opportunity for
children
 to gain
a
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valuable
work
experience
 and it will be very important for learning and taking responsibility. Some people can say it will be a violation of child rights, but I think it will be an immense advantage for a child to enlighten their future. In some
countries
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 Scouts have a week to do some job and earn money to spend to fulfil the requirements of the organisation. By doing these things
children
 get
experience
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 of the
socity
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society
 and they learn to take responsibility. In
Thailand
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 I saw students
work
 in the school coffee shops in their schools. They are taking responsibility
of
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 the whole process going on in the coffee shop and they not only learn
the
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things about the products but
also
 gain knowledge about the accounts and marketing side. In conclusion, the gain of
experience
, ability to take responsibilities and learning outcomes are very advanced
of
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 the students who engaged in paid
work
. Because of the above
reasons
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 I am encouraging the
children
 to do some paid
work
 as that will be a great investment for
child's
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 future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Child labor
  • Exploitation
  • Minimum age
  • Work experience
  • Survival
  • Taking responsibility
  • Education
  • Poverty
  • Legal restrictions
  • Physical toll
  • Psychological impact
  • Cultural perceptions
  • International conventions
  • Economic impact
  • Work-study programs
  • Skilled labor
  • Unskilled labor
  • Developing economies
  • Moral implications
  • Professional development
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