Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

gender

separation

at work and

school

is a big debatable issue in the community. Some individuals

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that schools should be mixed with

both

genders male and female,

while

other people claim that

gender

separation

is an advantage in institutions.

This

essay will look at

both

views and I will explain why I think that attending

both

boys

and

girls

in one place in

school

is better than

separation

. I will explain my reasons for it in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, there are many reasons why some people think that

gender

separation

at

school

is a positive thing. First and foremost,

both

genders have different types of interests in different fields.

For example

,

girls

are likely to more interested in design and art fields compared to

boys

and for that reason, they feel better

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their work in separate places

along

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with

girls

only and without

boys

.

Secondly

,

due to

the increase in assault cases in many countries, the government feel that it is better to change different sections for

both

male and female candidates. To illustrate

this

, In India, many

school

authorities have separate institutions and sections for women students and male candidates.

On the other hand

, there are a plethora of individuals who think that

gender

should not be separated at

school

as well as

at the workplace.

Firstly

,

working

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together youngsters can enhance their

both

cooperative skills and soft

skill

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skills

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by helping each other.

For example

,

girls

can teach

boys

students about designing knowledge and

male

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males

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can teach numerical lessons to the girl candidates and

as a result

, they can enhance their cooperative skills together, which is beneficial for their future careers.

Furthermore

, if

girls

learn to live in the male environment

then

they can do all

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works

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which men can do easily by seeing and practising with them and for that reason, there will be no

gender

violence created in the environment .

To conclude

, to some extent

due to

increasing assault cases

gender

separation

is compulsory.

However

, I think that schools should

be mixed

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both

genders together in the classroom

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also

, which helps them to build their cooperative and problem-solving skills effectively.